本篇为熬夜看手机危害,李华为他的朋友提的建议。
Dear Todd:
I noticed that+(背景材料)you said the worsening eyesight is bothering you in your last letter and I personally think it's urgent for you to quit staying up late playing with your phone.(建议引出)
For one thing, when you indulge(v.沉湎,沉溺;纵容,迁就;满足(情感、兴趣、欲望等);参加,参与(尤指违法活动)) yourself in playing with the phone in darkness,the contrast between the bright light of the screen(n.屏幕,荧光屏) and the dark environment may damage your eyes.And you may suffer from lack of sleep if you stay up late. (都可以经量模仿句式
what's more, it's very time-consuming and addictive to play with the phone.(转折指出危害,点题到位,能使阅卷老师明确知道。
To sum up(总而言之,it's no good staying up playing with your phone.Early to bed(v.固定/嵌入) and early to rise a man healthy ,wealthy and wise.(很不错的结尾,再次点题。
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